Valkyrie: New scenario - A Little Night Music

[jlederer2]

Description of Problem or Question

Thanks for Valkyrie! I have a new scenario to be added.
It's located at https://github.com/jlederer2/Valkyrie/tree/master/EditorScenario12

Valkyrie Version

2.1.5

[BenRQ]

Hi @jlederer2,
thanks for the new scenario :)

Can you please rename your scenario, and directory so it is not "EditorScenarioXX" but something closer to your scenario name ?
This name is used in stats, and it needs to fit your scenario name.

Also your scenario picture need to be a square so it fits current display format.

[jlederer2]

Done
https://github.com/jlederer2/Valkyrie

[chrismaliszewski]

Hi.

I can't play this scenario as I don't have the necessary expansions but I've checked it.

So:
-(mistake) misspelling in the 'invesigators' at the beginning of the game,
-(suggestion) I'd advice to that the text 'If at first, you don't succeed' to something more elaborate and not so diminishing (I think it's the correct word :)); the same goes with some other 'fail' tests' result texts,
-(suggestion) I'm not a game developer, but I've heard that it's good if each location in a game tells a story. Therefore, I'd suggest creating something interesting for a building on the left side of the map,
-(bug) when you pick up a shotgun, there is only a 'Cancel' button. Shouldn't there be a 'Continue' instead?
-(bug) after examining the Photographic Evidence for 2>= more time, there should be text instead of nothing,
-(suggestion) I'm not sure I understand correctly '4 spaces in the tile outside the house'. Instruction is not clear enough, to me at least.

1. Does it mean, a player can move himself 4 spaces in any direction from the house? Does that include only outside spaces or also inside ones, i.e. from one building to another? If another tile is not visible, can I uncover it without using an action? Etc.
2. It isn't said if the moving rules apply in this situation or not.
3. Can a player move up-to 4 spaces or 4 spaces exactly?
4. Isn't that OP? As I mentioned in point 1., a player can move sooo far away, it can be ridiculous. 2 spaces should be enough, I think.

That's what I found. I think the scenario is good. If you put even more story into it, it can be great!

Cheers.

[jlederer2]

Wow, great feedback, thanks! Will do!

Jim Lederer
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On Jan 15, 2019, at 11:40 PM, chrismaliszewski [e-mail] wrote:

Hi.

I can't play this scenario as I don't have the necessary expansions but I've checked it.

So:
-(mistake) misspelling in the 'invesigators' at the beginning of the game,
-(suggestion) I'd advice to that the text 'If at first, you don't succeed' to something more elaborate and not so diminishing (I think it's the correct word :)); the same goes with some other 'fail' tests' result texts,
-(suggestion) I'm not a game developer, but I've heard that it's good if each location in a game tells a story. Therefore, I'd suggest creating something interesting for a building on the left side of the map,
-(bug) when you pick up a shotgun, there is only a 'Cancel' button. Shouldn't there be a 'Continue' instead?
-(bug) after examining the Photographic Evidence for 2>= more time, there should be text instead of nothing,
-(suggestion) I'm not sure I understand correctly '4 spaces in the tile outside the house'. Instruction is not clear enough, to me at least.

Does it mean, a player can move himself 4 spaces in any direction from the house? Does that include only outside spaces or also inside ones, i.e. from one building to another? If another tile is not visible, can I uncover it without using an action? Etc.
It isn't said if the moving rules apply in this situation or not.
Can a player move up-to 4 spaces or 4 spaces exactly?
Isn't that OP? As I mentioned in point 1., a player can move sooo far away, it can be ridiculous. 2 spaces should be enough, I think.
That's what I found. I think the scenario is good. If you put even more story into it, it can be great!

Cheers.

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[jlederer2]

Updated per feedback.

[scrubbless]

I've added this to the manifest and stats sheet, sorry I didn't see this sooner!

[jlederer2]

I've added this to the manifest and stats sheet, sorry I didn't see this sooner!

@scrubbless Thank you!

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