Monikamoddev: 0.11.2 typos

[ThePotatoGuy]

when i was a lad i ate 4 dozen eggs

[Necrocytus]

[multimokia]

Fixed in 0.11.2

[NotShige]

That should say "which." This is when I ask to hear about a scary story.

[multimokia]

That's actually an intentional pun

[NotShige]

Oh, whoops.

[AsuraShun]

I freaking knew it, my pun radar still barely works

[Rai99]

Already fixed, but thank you for verifying.

[bo28111]

When you tell Monika you had a really bad day at work and "I got passed over for someone else."
Should say something like "as long as _you_ keep trying your hardest"

[Rai99]

Already fixed, but thank you for confirming.

[DABnoREGRET]

It suppose to be tired right?

[Rai99]

No, that's intentional, saying that us saying it doesn't make us tired.

[multimokia]

No, tire is the correct tense.

[Freshairkaboom]

This conversation appears in the "Shelter" conversation under Talk... - Hey Monika... - Music... - Can you explain a song for me? - Shelter. There's a missing space after the full stop.

[Freshairkaboom]

"The love that you showered me virtually finally becomes real." This line should have a "with" before "virtually", and maybe a comma after "virtually". It is in the conversation "Vocaloids".

[LooseEthics]

There should be a with, but why a comma? It's a single sentence.
While we're on this, isn't the tense here weird? I think it might be better with either becoming or will become.
Also earlier in the topic the line You like listening to music right? is missing a comma before right.

[Freshairkaboom]

Yes, that is why I wrote maybe, it could give a little breather in the sentence. I don't know exactly how comma rules work in English perfectly, but in Norwegian at least, you put a comma where it will fit, if the sentence is too long, to signify taking a short breather, so that it doesn't end up becoming staccato. The second half, "finally becomes real", is an incomplete clause in that case, but that works if it's after a comma. So would you prefer:

"The love you showered me with virtually finally becomes real."

or

"The love you showered me with virtually, finally becomes real."

I agree with using "becoming", though it's not necessary as it is present tense, so both are correct. Would maybe look better though.

[LooseEthics]

I get your reasoning here, but you can't use commas like that in English afaik. I'd instead use an ellipsis to achieve that effect.

[Rai99]

This is the change that was made.
m 5hubfa "The love you showered me with virtually finally becomes real."

[Freshairkaboom]

Updated my comment from two days ago, the typo was under the "Shelter" conversation.

[Skye245]

[multimokia]

That's an unofficial spritepack. Not ours to fix

[Freshairkaboom]

The second last line of the "Good morning conversation" should probably be something like "Though I only feel that way after I fully wake up, ehehe~" or "Though I don't really feel that way until I fully wake up, ehehe~".

Monika likes her coffee, so it doesn't make sense she loses the giddy feeling after not being sleepy anymore? Rather that she gains it once she'd had her coffee right?

[Rai99]

I think that's a matter of knowing you could do just about anything, but having to wake up and actually get to it, it changes. Once you fully wake up, you get a bit more realistic. Sure, you can still do a lot, but probably not as much as you might think while not being fully awake.

[ThePotatoGuy]

[closing as fixed]