Monikamoddev: 091 typos

[ThePotatoGuy]

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[Thimeo]

I may be wrong, but the second sentence really confuse me, I don't know what she's trying to say, is it missing a word?

[jmwall24]

that is italicized because she says it with emphasis. that is referring to the mouse cursor. so she is saying the mouse cursor is real, since it exists in our reality. it's not a typo, but there was some internal debate over this line.

[MisterSimple]

monika_lottery

"The more I think about it , the more I believe that winning the lottery is a really bad thing."

There shouldn't be a space before the comma.

monika_grad_speech_not_paying_attention

"You have no idea how much that hurts, especially after how much of work I put into it..."

"How much of work" should be "how much work".

monika_fun_facts_open

"I found most of these online, so I can't say they're {i}definitely{/i} true... "

There shouldn't be a space between the ellipsis and the closing quotation marks.

monika_bad_facts_1

"'Humans only use 10 percent of their brain."

The closing single quotation mark is missing.

monika_bad_facts_2

"It says here that different areas of the tounge tastes different flavors."

"Tongue" is misspelled, and "tastes" should be "taste", because "different areas" is plural.

[RutTutPut]

"Competitive" in "I'm going to game for a little bit" is spelled "Competetive"

[TMZN0V4]

this is from the graduation speech

[MisterSimple]

monika_outfit, greeting_sweetpea, greeting_sunshine

"Embarrassing" is misspelled.

[AsuraShun]

[MisterSimple]

monika_imouto

"I won't get jealous. Things like love between siblings only happens in creepy romance stories anyways."

"Happens" should be "happen" ("things" is plural).

[TheSuperStu]

Hey, just some things.

In the greeting of greeting_japan: there is an apostrophe outside of the italics in the last line, the second apostrophe. I'm not sure the rules of italics, but I think the second one would be in the italics also.

In greeting_youtuber: "youtuber" is not capitalized, while in greeting_hai_domo, "YouTuber" is. I do not know if that first one needs to be capitalized the same way or not.

This one I think is more of a consistency thing when compared to the other options. On the main talk menu, "Goodbye" does not have a period, where the other options do. In the "Goodbye" menu, both "Goodbye" and "Nevermind" also do not have a period.
The same can be seen in the "I'm Feeling..." menu, as none of the options have periods and neither does the "like talking about something else" in the same menu.

[ghost]

Label : mas_scary_story_jack_o_lantern
Line 895

it's "has had", no ?

[multimokia]

Should just be 'had' (not 'had had') since the rest of the line is in past tense.

[MisterSimple]

I think "had had" makes the sentence flow better. "After Jack had his fill" makes the action seem more rushed, whereas "After Jack had had his fill" makes it more gradual and slow-paced, which fits better with how the story is told, in my opinion.