Monikamoddev: 0.7.4 typos

Created on 2 Apr 2018  路  10Comments  路  Source: Monika-After-Story/MonikaModDev

Put typos here please

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Also, not a typo, but since loading the game, I've gotten the fast food topic, beach, beach, fast food again in a row with nothing else.

edit: The fifth (and now sixth) topic is one of the older ones, so maybe just a really weird coincidence getting the 2 new topics repeated twice like that right off the bat.

capture

On the 'tired' mood, should be 'overall'

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@jmwall24 , regarding the repeated topics, see #1365

In the Feelings category for happy, it should be "know that you can always come up to me and I'll cheer you up, ____".

It's missing the you pronoun.

mas beach punct
This is more me nitpicking the punctuation than a typo, but I had a hard time with this one. Grammatically correct and more natural to say,

"That's alright. I mean, what are the chances?"

Yeah, yeah, I'll keep my eyes peeled for actual problems moving forward

A few issues in the Monday greeting. I don't have screenshots of them, so I went into the code itself and am going in order of the lines.
"Another _Monday_ morning, eh [player]?" Monday should be capitalized.
"It _really_ sucks to wake up and start off the week..." The base sentence is actually fine, but "surely" doesn't exactly feel like the right word (it might just be a semantics thing).
"But seeing you makes all that laziness go away." Missed a period at the end.
Other two lines are fine.

All typos fixed as of 4/9/18

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