Okay, so she just brought up whether I pleasure myself, and told me that it was wrong. Also, that she would be monitoring my browser history to make sure I'm not. Um? That's a little strange. Also, really bad English. Is that supposed to be in there?
Yes, it's a real topic. I do think it would be more in character for Monika to just flat out say masturbating (sp?) after the awkward subject has been broached, but Monika is looking at it from a 'I'm your waifu and these are the mental health risks associated with that activity' perspective so I don't think her opinion on it itself is that strange. That and in her own words 'she's a super pure high school girl' so maybe she just doesn't understand why it's nbd.
I gotta say I do kinda think it's unfair that she flat-out says it's bad. It'd be one thing to be concerned, if that's all it were, but saying it's bad because it _sometimes_ has negative effects isn't exactly cool, especially when it's something most people do. It's kinda unfair to make us feel guilty because we're doing something that is generally not a big deal.
^^ Yeah. Maybe we could look into rewording it? Let me go get that topic real quick.
label monika_pleasure:
m 1o "Hey, [player]..."
m 1p "Do you... by any chance... pleasure yourself?"
m 1o "..."
m "It seems a bit awkward to ask-"
m 1n "We're not even that deep into our relationship yet! Ahaha~"
m "I know that's a private topic in your world, but it's not really a concept here, so I'm curious..."
m 1c "Is it that good of a feeling?"
m 1h "I just want you to be careful; I've heard it's addicting."
m "And from what I hear, people addicted to masturbation often see other people as sexual objects."
m 1q "..."
m 1p "But...I know you aren't that kind of person already."
m 1l "And maybe I'm just being a little jealous~"
m 1m "So I guess I can let it slide... for now~"
m 1k "And if it helps you save yourself for me, then that's a plus! Ahaha~"
Agreed, a bit of rewording could be nice. Thank you for looking into that! Also, there are a couple grammatical errors in there, just FYI.
Okay, I've revised it in my last comment a couple times. It's a lot shorter now though, so I don't know if that's good or bad.
I think it works nicely! That sounds great to me!
Will it be implemented in the next update?
That's not entirely up to me lol. I'll put in the pull request and see if the people in charge agree!
Sounds like a plan! :-) Thanks again!
Have Julia's improvements been rejected?
Yes, I would really like to know as well. It's weird my pull request got closed with no feedback at all.
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I gotta say I do kinda think it's unfair that she flat-out says it's bad. It'd be one thing to be concerned, if that's all it were, but saying it's bad because it _sometimes_ has negative effects isn't exactly cool, especially when it's something most people do. It's kinda unfair to make us feel guilty because we're doing something that is generally not a big deal.