Foundation.mozilla.org: Consider copy changes for People page

[hannahkane]

This list updated per comments below:

• [x] Remove “:” at the end of the hero text
• [x] change the link that points here from the homepage from "See Network members" to "Member spotlight"
• [x] Add a "Member spotlight" header above cards

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Matthew points out that we haven’t solved problem of this looking like a comprehensive list of members yet. I'm not sure this will be solved with Hero text. Wondering if we need to add a header above the first row of cards? Or perhaps add a "you two can join the network"-style CTA somewhere?

Thoughts, @xmatthewx and @KevZawacki?

[xmatthewx]

Thanks. I think the link that points here from the homepage could say "Member spotlight" or something similar instead of "See Network members".

We could put a "Member spotlight" header above cards too.

Let's not add a CTA at this stage. We've hit pause on Join, running with list Sign up right now.

[KevZawacki]

@hannahkane OK by me to replace the ":" with a "."

And agree with @xmatthewx re: "Member Spotlight" header

[sabrinang]

Invision screens updated:

• People: https://projects.invisionapp.com/d/main#/console/10016110/216715363/preview
  
  
  
  • Removed “:” at the end of the hero text
  
  
  • Added a "Member spotlight" header above cards
  
  
• Home: https://projects.invisionapp.com/d/main#/console/10016110/216715355/preview and https://projects.invisionapp.com/d/main#/console/10016110/223997779/preview
  
  
  
  • Link text updated to "Member spotlight"